poem i wrote about lifting :)

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Phate89

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Getting that great pumped feeling when lifting
Is something that I look forward to do
makes me so happy i can't stop singing
reap the benefits and start lifting too

my long fitness journey has just begun
and looks like a valley with ups and downs
and i cant give up until I am done
and wont stop until my body has grown

going to reach my goal without any gear
and keep my diet moderately clean
because the thought of regression i fear
will keep going till i achieve my dream

this will be my inevitable Phate
Unless I slack then i might be little late

Not as good as shakespeare, but something i wrote up in my English class
 
That was pretty cool. :cool:

Since we are on the lifting poetry topic. Here is one of my favorites. I forget who originally wrote it. It has been circulating for decades.

THE SQUAT

Down this road, in a gym far away,
a young man was heard to say,
"no matter what i do, my legs won't grow"
he tried leg extensions, leg curls, and leg presses , too
trying to cheat, these sissy workouts he'd do.

from the corner of the gym where the big men train,
through a cloud of chalk and the midst of pain
where the noise is made with big forty fives,
a deep voice bellowed as he wrapped his knees.
a very big man with legs like trees.

laughing as he snatched another plate from the stack
chalking his hands and monstrous back,
said, "boy, stop lying and don't say you've forgotten,
the trouble with you is you ain't been SQUATTIN'."
 
Karky said:
dude.. have you ever listened to/read the lyrics to a song? :p
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NEVERRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRR

Yeah of course but poetry just makes me think of some guy with slicked back hair talking to a bunch of people crying and nodding their head. Songs on the other hand make me think of dancing and other people dancing etc.
 
Nice poem G, makes my poem look like crap, but nice nonetheless. Wheres chillen, I thought that he'd be posting all over this thread with rhymes because he loves poems!
 
um..............ah........well.......k

Great work man!
let's see!

don't be a sissy
when I don't sweat daily
I get kinda pissy
so, do it like I do
sweat daily verses being a fool
oh- and flax seed enhances my pooh
woopdie do
I wrote a poem
passing the talking stick to you


:)

I actually feel kinda proud of that.
 
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