lol, In high school (that's as far as I got) I was pretty much the queen of stretching out introductions and conclusions. Just add a lot of "in conclusion" and "therefore" type sentences. Yeah right. don't listen to me, I graduated high school with a 2.5 G.P.A. I still have nightmares that they tell me it was a mistake, I shouldn't have graduated and that I have to come back. Sounds like your doing good, don't let that homework get the best of you!