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You have the google ads on top of your actual website info......before I can even start reading about you, I'm already think ....what are they trying to sell me?.......and why in the world would you want me to leave your site on a google link before I even know who you are and the mission of your website?

You might want to clean it up a bit
 
Your Site said:
Before more we go to alert for the arduous task that is to lose weight/fat. Although to be necessary very effort everything is obtained.
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Alot of your wording doesn't really make sense. Could just be me though.
 
Yes you are right. It is a lot of words to translate portugues to english and I'm not used to do that. I'm improving myself. In some cases I could´t find the right ones so I'm trying to find nice english people to make comments like yours kaleigh :)
 
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